Dialogue Edit:
As Kohza falls, the voice in his mind is from when he was a child, but in the dub they are his own thoughts.

     Clip Edit:
A flash of Kohza as a child happens after Vivi watches (close up on her eyes), but this is cut out.

As the rebels are getting ready to fight, a group shot of them before Vivi continues to watch (a royal guard holding a pistol is right after) is cut out.

     Dialogue Edit:
Vivi notices that Baroque Works was behind the shooting, but in the dub, we can be unsure since it's silent when the tattoo on the man's arm is being focused.

     Mistake:
They missed a frame when erasing the blood from Kohza's face. (Image)

     Clip Edit:
Well, it's nice to see random words on shirts and such are being left alone, but the guns are still bright green. There's a part where the camera spots a smiling man with a pistol dressed to blend in with the rebels. He gets some dialogue and shoots again, but this is cut out.

     Dialogue Edit:
The second time Vivi shouts for them to stop fighting is supposed to be silent, but they added dialogue.

     Clip Edit:
Right after, a close up of a pistol firing. This is cut, but the soldier falling down isn't.

     Dialogue Edit:
The third time Vivi shouts, the same thing happens again. (like last dialogue edit)

     Clip Edit:
Right after, something blows up, and Vivi's still trying to shout. The part with Vivi is cut.

Some whirl of sand afterwards, and again, the part with Vivi and her beginning to cry is cut.

Miss Allsunday speaks to Vivi, and then there is a shot of the war that is taken out. The second one is left in place, which has something blowing up on the side.

     Dialogue Edit:
Chaka is given dialogue, "Long... live... Alabasta..." before falling.

When Crocodile turns to face Vivi, he is given dialogue, "Wait."

Crocodile (K-F): Heh.
Crocodile (4Kids): I wanna tell you something.

Vivi: You started that blinding cloud of sand.
Vivi: Gimme one guess. This sandstorm is yours.

Vivi: Yet...
Crocodile: Bingo! You win the door prize.

Vivi: Yet... if I stop the explosion in fifteen minutes,
Crocodile: Time's running out, princess.

Vivi: I can still save some of them!
Vivi: Crocodile, you've got everything you want. Stop the bomb, nobody else has to suffer.

Crocodile: I thought you knew me better than that.

Crocodile: "If I do this, I can stop the rebellion."
Crocodile: I like to make people suffer.

Crocodile: "If I do that, I can stop the rebellion."
Crocodile: It's the reason I wake up everyday.

Crocodile: Your zealous idealism disgusts me.
Crocodile: I know it's just peace and love and pretty little flowers with you.

     Digital Edit:

     Dialogue Edit:
Crocodile: Ideals can only be spoken by those powerful enough to carry them out.
Crocodile: Well, the world isn't filled with peace and love and flowers. It's filled with hatred and poison and war.

Crocodile: And that excludes you!
Crocodile: Now wake up and smell the bugspray.

     Digital Edit:
Haha, you have a short arm, Vivi. It's probably hard to tell from the picture, but I mostly want to point out that in the dub pic, the line that makes up the lower part of her wrist isn't fully connected, because then we could imply that that's where her elbow is, right? But it isn't, so it looks like that's where her shoulder is, making it look like a small arm. (Image)

     Dialogue Edit:
Crocodile's given extra dialogue before a close up of him. Cigar's gone, as a reminder.

After Cobra tells Vivi to run, Crocodile is given more dialogue while the war continues on.

Crocodile: Fifteen more minutes until the bomb goes off in the Square.
Crocodile: And the little princess gives me more bag for the buck.

     Clip Edit:
After the above dialogue, the camera moves to view the statue of the jackal, but this is cut. It is followed by the view of the falcon's statue, which is kept in.

     Dialogue Edit:
Crocodile: And completely oblivious to your cruel fate,

Crocodile: they will walk right into the range of the blast.
Crocodile: What they don't know won't hurt them... oh wait! It will!

     Digital Edit:

     Dialogue Edit:
Crocodile holds Vivi over the battlefield, and Cobra is given dialogue.

Crocodile: And look at her now. Daddy's little loser.

Crocodile: Your foolhardy attempt to save them all has failed!
Crocodile: She's Miss Goody Two-shoes and wants to make sure that nobody gets hurt.

Crocodile's given more dialogue when the camera views the swirling sandstorm below.

Crocodile: From the very beginning to the very end, you have all made me laugh!
Crocodile: Actually, I should put you on my payroll! You've been one of my best agents yet!

Crocodile: Every single one of you in this country!
Crocodile: The only problem is, I couldn't stop laughing at you!

     Clip Edit:
After the above, a flashback of Igaram's demise back in Whiskey Peak is taken out.

     Dialogue Edit:
Crocodile: You were a spy in my organization for two years. Great job.
Crocodile: You're nothing but a big joke, princess. You're just a walking-talking punchline!

     Clip Edit:
A flashback of Toto while Vivi begins to shed tears is cut out. Afterwards, a shot of Vivi, with Crocodile's hand visible, is cut.

     Digital Edit/Mistake:

     Clip Edit:
After the English commercial break, you get a shot of the sun. Afterwards, a repeat of Vivi falling down (away from the camera) is inserted here.

A flash of a wing, a barrel, and Pell's clothing is taken out. This occurred before seeing Luffy riding on Pell.

     Dialogue Edit:
Luffy's given some dialogue as Pell swoops down towards her.

Vivi: Everyone is going to die!
Vivi: All these fine men will be wiped out! Royals, rebels, everybody!

Vivi: My voice isn't reaching anyone...
Vivi: Even worse, this war -- it'll go on 'till the last soldier drops.

Luffy: Don't worry.
Luffy: C'mon Vivi, don't cry!

Luffy: Just hang on! I can hear you loud and clear, okay?

Luffy: We can hear you just fine.
Luffy: I'm gonna punch out Crocodile and then we'll chow down!

Luffy: Just like you promised.

     Clip Edit:
While carrying Nami, Zoro slashing down a rebel (in his point of view) is cut out.

     Dialogue Edit:
Zoro carries Nami!
Nami: Oh shut up! You're a man, stop whining! My leg is hurt! I can't stand up! Oh, I'm going to faint.
Nami: Quit your griping, Zolo. With my bad foot I can barely walk.

Zoro: LIAR!
Zolo: Wish you could barely talk.

Nami: Don't step in the horse poop. Try not to buck so much; You're bumpier than Eyelash!

Back to Luffy.
Pell: Be careful, Luffy-kun.
Pell: Be careful, Luffy. You're still weak.

Luffy: I ate a ton of meat. I've got loads of energy!
Luffy: Hey, no problem! I've had meat, and I'm loaded with water!
Way to tell everyone what you've got in the barrel already.

Luffy: I... won't lose again.
Luffy: I'll get you this time!! Count on it!

Crocodile: You couldn't count a two if they spotted you the one!

Crocodile: How could he escape the quicksand with those wounds...
Crocodile: Did they patch you up with some bubblegum, rubberboy?

Sanji speaks to Vivi while someone runs to meet up with them, but instead in the dub it's Zoro talking, to get Nami off his back. It's supposed to be a surprise, so Nami can immediately strike Usopp in the head for the Clima Tact!

Vivi: Nami-san, Mr. Bushido...
Vivi: Oh my gosh? Nami and Zolo!

Nami: Glad we finally made it.

Vivi: Everyone is safe!
Vivi: So cool! You're safe!

Sanji: You asshole! How the hell did Nami-san get hurt!? I'll kill you!
Sanji: I take my eyes off of her for 5 minutes and you let her get hurt. What's the deal?

Zoro: She's fine!
Zolo: Go suck a slug!

Usopp: Chopper, do me a favor.
Usopp: Chopper, answer me! I'm really stumped!

Usopp: Burn my crying dead body in the vast, untamed wilderness.
Usopp: How do you go to the bathroom when you're all wrapped up like this?

Chopper: He's suddenly succumbed to his mortal wounds!
Chopper: Hey! Let's hurry up!

     Clip Edit:
Going back to Luffy, some stills are cut out. One of himself, one of Crocodile, and one of his elongated arms.

     Dialogue Edit:
Luffy: Sorry, guys.
Luffy: Okay, here goes.

Luffy: I went and lost to him.
Luffy: That Crocodile really beat up on me last time.

Luffy: That's why...
Luffy: But guys,

Luffy: That's why...
Luffy: it won't happen again!

Luffy: I won't lose again! You guys take care of the rest!
Luffy: I'm gonna get him good! 'Cause I figured out his weakness.

Zoro: Go on, get outta here.
Zolo: Take him to the mat, Luffy.

Sanji: Heh.
Sanji: << I know you can do it. >>

     Mistake?:
It seems that they're letting some red scratch marks go, because Luffy doesn't look like he's edited. The others get edited, so it's not like they've quit.

     Dialogue Edit:
Usopp: If you can't beat him...
Usopp: Go hit him with your best shot!

Usopp: ...THEN WHO THE HELL IS SUPPOSED TO!?
Nami: << You can do it, Captain! >>

Chopper: ...
Chopper: Uhh...

Luffy: I'm finishing this. All of it!
Luffy: He's as good as gone!

After the English commercial break, the camera viewing everyone is repeated. It's after everyone shouts and an explosion occurs behind them. So then, we have this piece of dialogue occur...
Luffy: I'll finish off Crocodile, and then we can eat!

Pell is given thought dialogue when Vivi is put to tears.

Crocodile: No matter how many times we fight, you'll never be able to even punch me!
Crocodile: Wise up, Straw Hat. If you had any brains, you'd stay far away from me.

Crocodile: Or would you like to be impaled again?
Crocodile: I'll just turn you into shish-kabob!

Luffy: You're gonna take it on the chin!
Luffy: I WET MY FIST THIS TIME!

Cobra: Who is that!?
Nebra: So that's... Luffy...

After hitting Crocodile with the Buzzsaw technique, got an extra bit from Luffy.
Luffy: CROCODIIILE!!

     Clip Edit:
Before you see Luffy smirking from the hit, one angle of Crocodile falling down is cut.

When Crocodile hits the ground, Luffy sits up a little more, but he doesn't seem to in the dub (I'm not talking about the part where he stands up, because this happens in both versions).

     Dialogue Edit:
Luffy: Hey, how does it feel now, you overstuffed sandbag?
Luffy: I know you don't think I'm very smart, but guess what!
Luffy: I figured out that when you get wet, your body hardens, and you can't turn to sand!
Luffy: So you can be clobbered when you're a big stiff!
Luffy: I knew it when you busted the water barrel Tutu gave me.
Luffy: It spilled on you, and your arm got really hard.
Surprise. In the original, Luffy is silent when Crocodile's on the ground, but he speaks these lines in the dub.

     Clip Edit:
A view of the castle, the clock, and Luffy panting is cut. They're before you see Crocodile on the ground, after having the camera leave the scene for a while.

     Dialogue Edit:
Luffy: Get up.
Luffy: Then I grabbed you with my wet hand,

     Clip Edit:
After the view of Crocodile on the ground (while the above occurs), there is a flashback from the time when Luffy got impaled, and this is cut.
Luffy: The water I got from Yuba that spilled on your hand showed me.

     Dialogue Edit:
Luffy: When you get wet, you can't turn into sand.
Luffy: and you were in pain. Which means you can't beat me when I'm wet.

...

Luffy: Now I can kick your ass.
Luffy: You wanna fight me? Let's fight.

Luffy: Let's fight.
Luffy: I'm angry and I'm wet.

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